Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion?
In this day and age, spending time in front of the TV has become a debatable issue among people from all walks of life all around the world. Although TV channels play an increasingly important role in spreading news and awareness, there are a number of people hold the opposite view. This essay will first discuss the potential negative impacts of TV along with supporting arguments, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, there are myriad of reasons why TV is dangerous, but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that TV makes a person out of contact with society. Then there are concerns about physical damage to the eyes by spending an enormous amount of time in front of the TV. According to startling research, for example, around 30% of people in the United States suffering from eye diseases by watching TV.
On the other hand, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that TV plays a significant role in keeping them up to date with current affairs and entertainment. It should also be taken into account that television decreases the depression and loneliness of elderly people. As an illustration, extensive research has shown that elderly who watch TV for two hours per day release better happy hormones from their body.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the disadvantages of TV far outweigh its advantages. Parents should take measures to limit screen time to 1 hour a day or less for children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, while, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89883268482 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70637043757 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649805447471 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.3358518908 50.4703680194 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.454545455 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158971260747 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576186030025 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328842975581 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911710573797 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030380395651 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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