Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Recently, the phenomenon of the behavior of the children and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. Although contested by the significance of complex procedures is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and consequently positive by substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that responsible for child's behavior can be a plus and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
For one, it is commonly accepted that children are a fresh slate and they absorb even the tiniest bits of information from their parents. For example, a 5 years old boy can easily learn the coarse language, if his parents talk to each in an abusive way. This example clearly shows that children are like a sponge and their characters can be easily shaped by their parents’. Thus, it is quite evident why this idea has garnered support.
In addition, parents act as the child’s leaders, a and for this they are accountable for teaching social behavior to their child as well as disciplining him. As my own experience, my (never-born!) nephew used to bring home his friend’s toys whenever he went to his house for playing. His parents talked with him and explained to him to why this unauthorized action is not a correct one. As this unacceptable manner could have become a habit, parents’ role to discipline the children and to teach them what is wrong and what is correct is quite evident. This example fortifies the argument of why parents are responsible for their children’s behavior.
To calculate, after analyzing how parent’s own behavior can mirror their child’s in addition to their leadership role, it has been proven that why they should be accountable for what their kid does.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 20.9802955665 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15277777778 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07141559383 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586805555556 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2254898408 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.153846154 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237655275158 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953337497893 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722195202256 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146422583146 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452227610921 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.5 Out of 90
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