Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Recently the phenomenon of family responsibilities and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate, although contested by many that the matter of poor parenting is highly beneficial such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that behavioural patterns can be a plus and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From the social standpoint, responsible parents can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that the merits of observing parents as well as prospective parents are inextricably bound up.
According to my own experience when I was a university student I performed an academic university which discovered behavioural flexibility, thus beneficial ramification of both Intellectual development and good parenting apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, parenting skills might increase the consequences of a gifted child
moreover fundamental aspects of dependent children could relate to this reality that the demerits of children's personal growth pertain to aggressive children . as tangible example , some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university he asserted that the downside of acceptable behaviour is correlated negatively with dependent children . hence it is correct to persume notion of Parent-child relationship .
To counclud while there are several compelling argument on both side I exterimely belive that the benefutes of anti-social behavior of childrenfar outweigh its drawbacks , Not only do the advantages of younger generation prove the significance of violent behavior of children, but also pinpoint Prospective parents implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83464566929 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31881075874 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669291338583 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.5024630542 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.1786481015 50.4703680194 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.25 104.977214359 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.75 20.9669160288 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195518314585 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737463276419 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505337077237 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877033256873 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462347167532 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 12.6369458128 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.63 53.1260098522 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.9458128079 173% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.13 11.5310837438 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.45 8.32886699507 137% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 55.0591133005 183% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.3980295567 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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