Parents should be held legally responsible for children’s act. What is your opinion?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend to see prodigies discussing the fact that it should be the legal responsibility of parents to control their children’s behavior. I, personally believe that this statement is more realistic and worth to believe. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the reasons to explain my view point before deducing any conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments discussing the fact that parents are held responsible for their children’s act. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stem from the fact that both parents are involved in upbringing of their children and in every act, they are portraying the behavior which they learnt from parents. As a prime example, according to recent research from the department of medical science, 80 percent of the human brain develops in first five years of child and this period is really crucial for parents to guide them the difference between right and wrong, sacrifice, honesty, morality and alot of other behaviors.
On the other hand, another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that it is said that children are visual learners and they learn from environment and people who are close to them. Hence, the most closest people around the child are parents and siblings, to whom they learn from. Therefore, parents should be held responsible for every single act of their little ones.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that parents behavior and actions are greatly visible in children acts. Thus, ideas that will bring benefit would be cordially welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, really, so, therefore, thus, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2519379845 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72591969486 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600775193798 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6616379484 50.4703680194 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.181818182 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318958210249 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124500291767 0.0925447433944 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135132601195 0.071462118173 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178655383743 0.151781067708 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450162881967 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.