Effective learning requires time, comfort and peace so it is impossible to combine study and employment. Study and employment distract one from another. To what extent do you think the statements are realistic? Support your opinion with examples?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the fact that peaceful and comfortable environment is required for effective study. In this regard some people opine that study along with part time employement deviates the focus and concentration of a person from his basic aim of effective learning. Critics, however claim that one should have potential of doing professional studies along with employment. In my opinion, former argument is more realistic and worth to believe. in this essay, I, shall highlight some of the important features of this statement before deducing a final conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments discussion the fact that part time employment effects professional studies to larger extent. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that professional studies are the basic requirement of every student to build the particular career in some field. Hence, this requires proper attention and peaceful environment and fresh mind to concentrate and focus. As a prime example, according to recent research from the department of medical science, an average person requires atleast 8 hours of sleep a day for effective learning, and this could not be possible with part time employment to continue study.
Another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that in certain situations, which include study in foreign countries require part time employment to compensate fee bills of universities. In this case, study with job is mandatory to continue with extra efforts. but one has to remember that these are just rare exceptions rather common facts.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that effective learning need proper attention and peaceful mind for more productive results. Therefore, ideas that will bring benefits would be cordially welcomed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, so, therefore, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49122807018 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84494118854 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1978229465 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.785714286 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298117412286 0.242375264174 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958501845619 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534716220906 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170021250685 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725950857559 0.0609392437508 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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