. Personal Development is the base for professional development and advancing in one’s career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend to see prodigies discussing the fact that personal grooming is the bases of professional development and and achievement of success in one’s carrier. In my opinion, this statement is more realistic and worth to believe. in this essay, I shall highlight some of the main features of this statement before deducing any conclusion.
At the out set, there are myriad of arguments discussing the fact that personal development is necessary to build professional developments and it’s further achievements. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stem from the fact that groomed and polished personality is the key factor to achieve one’s most important goals of life. as a prime example, according to the recent research conducted on office employees who are prominent and unique in their abilities are those who are more dedicated and hard working.
Another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that personal development of a person depicts his passion to achieve his goal in short period of time through proper hard work and keen interest in tasks given to him.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that major factor behind the success of any professional is the only ability of having good personal development. Therefore, ideas that will bring benefits would be cordially welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, therefore, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35648148148 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96446359569 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62037037037 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7364750668 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.555555556 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221226756897 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838723415587 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939720494432 0.071462118173 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120534054612 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530249740375 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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