PARENTS SHOULD BE HELD LEGALLY RESPONSIBLE FOR THEIR CHILDREN’S ACT. WHAT IS YOUR OPINION?
The important effect of responsible for their children act, which was always debatable but has now become more controversial with many people claiming that. it is beneficial which other reject this nation. The sustainable influence of parents responsible to guide their children for any time has sparked the controversy over the potential impsact of this trend in recent years. In my opinion the former proposition appears to be a rational and this essay will further elaborate my reasons. For forming the positiv nagative affect of this trend and thus will lead to be a logical conclusion.
At the outset there are numerous reasons of how parents responsible for their children act but the most conspicious one stems, from the fact that paresnts will always take care of their children. As an illustration parents will help for their children at good or bad .
Nevertheless according to some people there remain some drawbacks, which can certainly overwhelem the potential influence of parents responsible for their children act, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that nowdays children feel more indipendent so they try to take their decisions by themselves.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the impact of responsible for their children act is prominent althgough the way parents play an crucial role in children life sould be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18584070796 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76880570004 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579646017699 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.696290573 50.4703680194 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.222222222 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395615988693 0.242375264174 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165600678452 0.0925447433944 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932390255403 0.071462118173 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259281291177 0.151781067708 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453109200553 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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