Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion?
Children, yet to receive citizenship, aged below eighteen in most of countries some time perform mis-activities. Some people believe parents should be responsible for their children’s wrong doings while others believe children should be forgiven and parents are not to blamed for. However, in my perspective, parents should be penalized according to level of misdemeanour children perform.
On the top of all, parents are the first teacher of their offspring. Children receive first level of morals of dos and don’ts at home which reside in their inner subconscious level. This is mean to say, father and mother should be accountable to impart children the basic behavioral lesson which forms the foundation of further learning. For instance, in a survey conducted by childrengrowth.com, it was found that most of children learn dos and don’ts from their parents more easily than from others.
Secondly, Parents are those who can understand their children inner beauty soonest of all. If parents could treat children responses and treat their behavior as accordingly, there is a chance of correction in the foundation of school of thoughts. For example, according to offspringact.com, nobody can understand children to the depth as parents do. This suggests that parents are the one who are accountable most.
In a nutshell, if parents are legally penalized with some amounts as according to the mis-behavior their children perform, it will make parents more cautious and responsible towards their children activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
...ive citizenship, aged below eighteen in most of countries some time perform mis-activities. Some ...
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Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the children') or simply say ''most children''.
Suggestion: most of the children; most children
...y childrengrowth.com, it was found that most of children learn dos and don'ts from their pa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51898734177 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12797989455 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552742616034 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7813400393 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404152488181 0.242375264174 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155298703643 0.0925447433944 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983875589934 0.071462118173 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266314499045 0.151781067708 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058059204544 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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