In the past 100 years there have been many inventions such as antibiotics airplanes and computers. What are the greatest inventions of the 20th century among medicine, aero plane and computers, why?
These days there is an ongoing debate between people about which is greatest invention medicine, science or technology. While it is possible to claim that invention in any industry will have more impact on human lives, my view is that invention in technology greater than other and the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of argument.
There are several reasons why technology inventions are great than other inventions. One of them is that technology inventions made our life easier. It can also be argued with that technology inventions will help other industry invention such as medicine, aerospace, defense, financial, chemical industry etc. It should also be taken into the account that people can able to their day-to-day activities easily by technology inventions. For example, they can order food, cloth, vegetables through online. they can send or receive money anywhere at any time. The invention of block chain technology will serve for financial industry.
Those who argue for medicine, science inventions are greater than technology have different view and say that it can be actually a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that inventions in medicine will have direct impact on human lives. Then there are concerns about too many inventions at technology represents the laziness of the people.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of case, my opinion is that technology inventions are greater than the other. I would strongly recommend that inventions of any field have to be used in right way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the greatest'.
Suggestion: is the greatest
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...food, cloth, vegetables through online. they can send or receive money anywhere at a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, then, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22957198444 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70494910966 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560311284047 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7399323379 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185472094315 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725252461811 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475844887849 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129814598878 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222602242968 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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