People are moving to urban areas from rural areas for better life . What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in urban areas and rural areas.
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals people are moving to urban areas from rural areas for better life has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain. Regarding this I would elaborate my viewpoints in given paragraphs.
On the one hand, several reasons can be drawn why people are moving to city from rural areas. Firstly, for better employment and business opportunities which are less in rural areas compare to urban areas. Secondly, in search of best infrastructure, health facilities and improved best education for their children . For example, best education will be provide by the school educations in city which will help children coming from rural areas for more learn discipline and best education.
On the other hand, the cost of living in cities is higher than rural areas, especially housing is very expensive. The weather of rural areas is clean environment than urban areas which is beneficial for people health. Life in cities can much stressful for people don’t have much time for themselves and their families gap between them. In rural areas people spend their time with their families and they live with love and happiness. Furthermore, in rural areas there is cheap accommodation faced by people. The cost of things is less price compare than urban areas. Moreover, that people who lives in rural areas they spent their times with families and they are happy.
In a nutshell, I will agree for both views. Life in urban areas is better for business and children education in rural areas life is best for they spent many time with their families.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, as for, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02397260274 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54775356655 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482876712329 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0171047408 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2941176471 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.533829660828 0.242375264174 220% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185456664402 0.0925447433944 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147862497377 0.071462118173 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.35656518837 0.151781067708 235% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362690964962 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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