"People don't react to climate change because it is too distant. to make the change, we need to focus on the immediate: pollution and air quality." Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement. support your point of view with reason and/or examples from your experience or observations.
Pollution is a term very often ignored by common people because the impacts of it are not immediately visible. People very often choose to believe that it is a myth and no action is required to change their actions on pollution and air quality. This essay will discuss, why there is dire need to bring the change in curbing air pollution immediately.
With the current trend, their is already a rise in the global temperature, which is already melting half of the ice present in polar regions, causing a tremendous increase in sea level. There are few island countries like the Maldives, which are on the verge of downing because of this increase in sea level. Thus it is safe to say that people need to act on pollution now even if changes are not visible at the moment.
Secondly, most of the gasses are invisible, which are not only responsible for the change in climate but also the overall well-being of a person. With the invention of vehicles, pollution is harming the air we breathe. Diseases like tuberculosis, asthma, etc are at peak because of the poor air quality. If change is not brought in the current lifestyle there is a great chance of impacting the climate and wellbeing of people permanently.
This essay discussed how climate is deteriorating and wellbeing of people is compromised. In my opinion, It is high time for people to bring the much-required change to avoid permanent damages to nature.
- Road rules are generally enforced by fining people for infringements. Some people, however, believe that governments should not penalize unsafe drivers but reward safe drivers instead. Which view do you support? 65
- Online shopping is destroying local business. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping with regards to this statement. 72
- "People don't react to climate change because it is too distant. to make the change, we need to focus on the immediate: pollution and air quality." Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement. support your point of view with reaso 55
- "People don't react to climate change because it is too distant. to make the change, we need to focus on the immediate: pollution and air quality." Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement. support your point of view with reaso 55
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 25, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...mmediately. With the current trend, their is already a rise in the global tempera...
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Line 4, column 310, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... because of this increase in sea level. Thus it is safe to say that people need to a...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82520325203 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72587271304 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516260162602 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1103026817 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.9166666667 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230458262313 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847497857326 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336789682706 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13343861153 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399257766959 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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