People in rural areas are moving to urban areas for job and study opportunities. Do you think this development is positive.
It is very common now a days to migrate to a larger city in order to gain better outcomes and it has been inevitable that this is causing detrimental effects in today's society. We would elaborate more on facts of this phenomenon and will drive in to possible logical conclusion.
To commence with, all notable individuals who thrived this world had to move in to large cities in the view of gaining access to different types of better resources, it can either be education or better job opportunities. Some might argue that governments should focus on developing infrastructure of rural areas but it is evident that any governing party would focus more on urban areas which accumulate further votes for their upcoming elections. Moreover, not only urban areas provide opportunities, but they also provide convenience of easy commute, extensive food choices, etc.
Opposed to that, rural areas consist of farm and agricultural lands which tends to face challenges in sourcing right individuals for highly resource intensive activities. Younger generation prefers to perform white collar jobs rather than exploring on culturally related jobs such as farming. Additionally, over population in urban areas contributes in to air and water pollution and city councils are facing uphill task of keeping up to such consequences. To exemplify, London faced dark clouds throughout the days just due to amount of emissions came out from urban factories.
While there are prominent drawbacks in the movement of people from rural to urban areas, we can conclude that no country could able to deploy measures to diminish such drastic effects of a significant phenomenon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
It is very common now a days to migrate to a larger city in order to...
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Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
It is very common now a days to migrate to a larger city in order to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27067669173 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88719846485 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68045112782 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.6666145833 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.2 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283525327806 0.242375264174 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876727128745 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050850343344 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135819849683 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853901204089 0.0609392437508 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.