People today rely too much on the internet. To what extent do you agree? Support your argument with reasons and examples.
In the 21st century there has been a drift in the technology as well as digitization. Internet is the answer to every minute problem. Furthermore, adults and children are both dependent on the internet. In my opinion, it is true that people, especially, the young generation, rely on the internet.
Firstly, internet has made our lives a lot more easier in terms of education, sport channels, bookings etc. Moreover, it has given us the opportunity to socialize and connect with everyone across the globe. If a tourist wants to know the historic places in India, then he can easily use the internet to suffice his mind. Therefore, you could easily rely on the internet for any information you want to gather.
Secondly, it helps us to make transactions online via plastic money, eventually, cutting out the problem of theft. Although, there are some disadvantages on the internet like your bank account could be hacked or you could be provided with some false information whatsoever. On the other hand, the internet could guide you through the wrong procedure for doing a particular transaction or an application process. As a result, you could suffer a lot and could get bankrupt.
It is true that people rely too much on the internet these days because of the benefit it serves. Similarly, it could do harm to an individual, but the advantages outweigh the disadvantages and can be relied upon on a frequent basis.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...stly, internet has made our lives a lot more easier in terms of education, sport channels, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, therefore, well, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94166666667 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8556839033 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6125 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6455248369 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.7142857143 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3571428571 7.25397266985 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222848324435 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718608969341 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593018513663 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132217350982 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375249612262 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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