Some people believe that exploring outer space is important because it expands human knowledge and might lead to discoveries that will benefit humanity in the future. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money that could be better spent solving immediate problems here on Earth.
In today's world, exploring the universe is continuously increasing. While some people think that exploring the universe will eventually benefit us in the future, others maintain that it is just a money wastage area. This essay will discuss why outer space exploration is beneficial for humanity.
At some point in the future, outer space will be the key element for the survival of human race. Exploring the outer space not only expands our knowledge, but it also might lead us to some unprecedented discoveries. In the coming years, for example, there is a possibility of life on the planet Mars, which is only possible if we spend more money in research and exploring the universe. As a result of this exponential discovery, there is no reason why space exploration is a waste of money.
Despite such advantages, some people think that curbing immediate problems on Earth should be our main concern. These people think that benefits of outer space are just a myth. Although, governments are already planning to take care of the problems on Earth. Expenditure on outer space is not a money wastage area, rather it will be useful for the survival of the human race.
The outer space advancements and discoveries have certainly risen the probability of human survival. In my opinion, this rapid advancement will take the humanity discovery to a next level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...enefits of outer space are just a myth. Although, governments are already planning to ta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01321585903 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76593753517 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546255506608 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 374.4 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1876199743 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.5384615385 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449449592895 0.242375264174 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155603777875 0.0925447433944 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782899717724 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26040387879 0.151781067708 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522166987278 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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