People usually mix their private and professional life.What are the pros and cons?
some individuals tend to mix their private and professional life in workplace or when study.Thus, these can bring detrimental consequences for their overall life. this essay will provide a rationale behind this behaviour which will lead to a conclusion.
At the outset, there are many reasons why avoid mixturing private and professional life can prevent people from having future issues. people are living in an ultra modern society in which sharing personal matters in a professional environment is part of their usual behaviour; nevertheless, it can be resulted in being bullying and discriminated by others, in particular if some disclose having sexual preference for their same gender and having a many partners at the same time. As it is obvious no one can take it positively because there are so much prejudice and poor understanding of this topic.
nevertheless, others argue that exposing their private life in a professional environment may allow others to have a better understanding of what happen in an individual's life, because many can judge him or her without not knowing their personal issues. In many organisations being honest to an employer about a personal issue may help to access additional support for example. Therefore, there are more benefits open up about a situation rather than reserve it to themselves.
From what have been discused, it can be concluded that sharing some of their personal matters in a professional environment can be seen as an opportunity to acess support;however, sharing too much of personal life can bring a negative impact on their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for example, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25680933852 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07306297186 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560311284047 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.3466656002 50.4703680194 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.111111111 104.977214359 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5555555556 20.9669160288 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272607112915 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108211564075 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106717226701 0.071462118173 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17194689265 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307491394102 0.0609392437508 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 12.6369458128 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 53.1260098522 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.