Personal Development is the base for professional development and advancing in one's career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the impact of personal development on advancing in one's career has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "does personal development effect on individual's career life? ". Whereas it is a widely held view that it does not the important effect, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the public perspective standpoint, professional life is bound up inextricably with academic study, which indicates it leads to both academic certificate and good job. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between life experience and personal traits as well as an exponential increase in professional performance. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of one's achievement is correlated positively with not only proficient skills but also personal life.
Within the realm of society, without the slightest doubt, successful career attribute to average income, in that it would come down to hard-working jobs, full-employment, great output. A salient example of such attribution is unskilled workers, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take young employer for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint grown-up environment problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to misbehavior, poor social interaction, and even bad habits. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of psychological development.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that the significance of personal development on career success is of the high importance. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1207.87684729 143% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84406779661 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26730427404 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 139.433497537 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677966101695 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 379.143842365 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1912601425 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.615384615 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204745290409 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531821080429 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087487115996 0.071462118173 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116032472379 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743894948718 0.0609392437508 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.89 11.5310837438 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.32886699507 129% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 55.0591133005 203% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.94827586207 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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