Personal development is the base for professional development, to what extent do you agree.
There is no denying fact is to saying that we are living in sophisticated era where everything depends upon the one’s life. Personal development is one of the big chance for people who want to do something in their life. It should not be good if we say that personal development is the base for professional development. I am totally disagree with this statement. Let’s delve deeper about this in forthcoming paragraph.
To start with the darkest point of the personal development is that people have degree or if they are doing a good work then they can gain personal development. Moving ahead, basically masses has good communication with others they know very well how we can interaction with others. However, personal development depends upon the behavior of the once. There are also myriads of advantages which provocate that personal development helps people to improve talent. Moreover, it is also improve the interpersonal skills which make them higher.
On the flip side of the essay, personal development is the base for professional development is totally different from each other. Further moving ahead, professional development depends upon the performance and handwork of individuals. Moreover, if one’s doing work well in their office then they can achieve big goal as well. Last but not least, professional development is also important for people for their higher position.
Hammering the last nail of the coffin, I would like to say that personal and professional both life are totally different from each other but both are important for masses. So they need to improve that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21153846154 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92107978333 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8685534943 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6875 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 7.25397266985 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309346044492 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109622808602 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114225665676 0.071462118173 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19622659279 0.151781067708 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756124184265 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.