Recently the freedom to work and live anywhere has become the main trend due to the development of communication technology and transportation
In modern world most of the people tends to live and work in different locations irrespective of the place they were born. This essay would discuss on the advantages and disadvantages on the above matter.
As a result of shifting to different locations people will loose the opportunity of meeting up their close family members. However the development of transportation and communication would mitigate the effects of this issue. Due to the technological advancement, people are facilitated to work from home using the remote technology.
Secondly will discuss on the advantages which people can experience due to the technological advancement. People can find job opportunities overall the world irrespective of their nationality, religion etc. On the other hand employers can find skilled employees from all over the world. This will increase the productivity of the manufacturing sector while increasing efficiency and effectiveness of the of the service sector. Some people travel long distance to reach their work place, however employers discourage them since they cannot expect efficiency from them.
In conclusion it is recommended to encourage for more technological advancements because people can spread all over the world and mingle with different cultures and people, which will finally make bridges among nations. And it will also enable employers for head hunting and find the best person for each job while not interupting their personnal lives.
- "Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up."To what extent do y 82
- Some people believe the large shopping malls are replacing local shops which is bad for local economies. What is your opinion? 88
- The ownership of cars should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 77
- Every year several languages die out. Some people think thatthis is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 78
- A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public.Write a letter to the company 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... meeting up their close family members. However the development of transportation and c...
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'of the'.
Suggestion: of the
...increasing efficiency and effectiveness of the of the service sector. Some people travel long...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55111111111 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07551059697 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4620297721 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.083333333 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106463808556 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045062733872 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578354396407 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740058512716 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055786640947 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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