School children nowadays are not playing more sports compared to their parents in their childhood. Do you agree or disagree? Support your ideas with examples.
Recently, the phenomenon of the comparison of the amount of time which is dedicated for sports between the youths and their parents in their childhood and its outcomes as children are less active nowadays and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although this issue is correct as it is regarded by the substantial number of individuals both destructive and negative, a considerable part of society do not deem it as the paramount issue.
From a social standpoint, the reality of our parents were more active in their sports activities than their young children provides society with the noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact of modernism and development. From my own experience, when I was a university pupil, I performed an academic experiment which discovered these causes. Firstly, internet, social media and other technological features are more allure for the youngsters than physical activities and they are not their first prioroties. Hence, they allocate a considerable amount of their time to play and be in these atmosphere.
Furthermore, the other paramount reason that the young generation are less active in compare with their parents is development provides societies with modern facilities and our cities are well-designed by these facilities which have the ability to alter the lifestyle, behaviour and attitudes. According to research undertaken by a prestigious world-renowned university, the sports facilities clubs and campuses are so expensive and it cause a financial problems for the youths to join and exercise.
In conclusion, while there are several reasons on both sides, I profoundly belive that the amount exercise that the children have in these days are so less than the one that our parents have and we should consider the catastrophic effects of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 287.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34146341463 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02269577928 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540069686411 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.5024630542 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.1225391991 50.4703680194 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.333333333 104.977214359 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8888888889 20.9669160288 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238183312311 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929067476773 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750191779984 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132965215593 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612951874232 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 12.6369458128 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.9458128079 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.94827586207 196% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.3980295567 138% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.5123152709 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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