Schools should prepare students for the university rather than for work?Do you agree?
These days, there is a controversial debate among people about the impacts of schools on
student's future. There are a great number of people who interpret the impact of school on
pupil 's career as thoroughly constructive, while others hold an opponent view. I am
inclined to believe that school should prepare student for university and these programs
should be promoted.
There are several reasons why school should prepare pupils for studying in university. First
of all, it is argued that university play a pivotal role in creating people, in university pupils
can learn about improving their living conditions, therefore they would create a feeling of
accomplishment and competence, which will open avenues to new achievements so student
's enthusiasm and determination will be amplified toward many daunting tasks, football team
in collage for example, even lazy students have to do uphill struggle to contribute in competitions
In addition, it is claimed that some measures can be taken by government to stimulate pupils
to try more in their courses, which will instill a sense self-esteem in students. Studying more
will foster the economy and welfare among youngsters. Specifically a research conducted by Yale
University in 2015 found that schools could enhance intellectual ability of students in their social and
personal lives.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propound the view that school could improve student 's abilities
for university enrollment, therefore governments should cognizance of this fact and try to adopt
this way of planning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57786885246 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97698723034 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627049180328 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 180.46121467 50.4703680194 358% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.125 104.977214359 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.9669160288 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.25397266985 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.12807881773 436% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29997254938 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143578566012 0.0925447433944 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114629070936 0.071462118173 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891335900902 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107732172547 0.0609392437508 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 12.6369458128 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.0 Out of 90
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