Should wealthy nations help poor countries with food and education, or is it the responsibility of poor nations to improve their condition?
Recently, helping the wealthy nation to poor countries has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question “Is it the responsibility of poor nations or not?”. Whereas it is a widely held view that the assistance of developed countries would be effective, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the socio-economic standpoint, international supports are bound up inextricably with developing poor nations, which indicates they lead to both the better world and globalization. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2014 demonstrates the relationship between developed countries and international interactions as well as an exponential increase in the collective interest. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of being an industrialized country is correlated positively with not only improving the global economy but also the elimination of the poverty.
Within the realm of the global cooperation, without the slightest doubt, wealthy nations attribute to responsibilities, in that it would come down to poverty, social inequalities, and the food shortage. A salient example of such attribution is international organizations, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take human rights for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint underprivileged people problems. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of wealthy governments in developing countries.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes “all’s well that ends well,” after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that developing countries should improve their situation with the assistance of wealthy nations. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-04-05 | mojtaba1980 | 84 | view |
- Cities are now expanding; the government should make the better network for public transport or should building more roads to facilitate car ownership? Agree or disagree? 77
- In today’s world, different government and international organization are confronting many problems. What is the most pressing problem among them? 75
- With the development of technology and science, some people believe that there is no great value for artists such as musicians and painters. What are the things artists can do but the scientist cannot? Why should we encourage the art area? 85
- Parents should be held legally responsible for children's act. What is your opinion? 88
- Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? 88
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...oes 'all's well that ends well,' after analyzing what elaborated above,...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1207.87684729 139% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86713286713 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4905193547 2.71678728327 128% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 139.433497537 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5294988933 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.545454545 104.977214359 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276552397334 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824962363467 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101758082432 0.071462118173 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150085175846 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861345080331 0.0609392437508 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 12.6369458128 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 53.1260098522 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 11.5310837438 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.32886699507 129% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 55.0591133005 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.94827586207 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.