Social media is a recent global phenomenon. Psychologists have shown that it impacts people's emotions both positively and negatively.
Do you think that social media alienates people or connects them?
Social networking enjoying its popularity among all groups of people worldwide. However, psychologists have concluded it as a both positive and negative impact on humans. This essay will discuss how social media both estrange and connects people.
To start with, social media plays an important role in connecting people irrespective of places. Through these networking sites one can easily get connected to anyone on this planet. Several social media platforms such as Facebook, Instagram etc helps people to get connected with their old school mates which was quite impossible kind of thing earlier. Thus,these mediums allow individuals to be in touch with their near and dear ones with ease.
Having said that, social media does have certain hidden pitfalls as well. Sometimes, these sources impact someone's life in a negative way, for instance, being connected with someone on these networking sites which is quite a virtual connection, leave someone with a feeling of loneliness. People's emotions get adversely affected by down feeling sometimes. As a result, most of the people find themselves detached from the real world.
This essay discussed how social networking sites makes people feel both connected with their friends or relatives and it also makes one feel isolated from the rest of the world. In my opinion, social media helps in connecting people more than alienating them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, well, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36363636364 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57874336749 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627272727273 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1088241949 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7692307692 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342333008529 0.242375264174 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137667041503 0.0925447433944 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908279169879 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232904745003 0.151781067708 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630372958161 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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