Some people argue that experience is the best teacher. Life experiences can teach more effectively than books or formal school education. How far do you agree with this idea? Support your opinion with reasons and/or your personal experience.
Nowadays, the controversial issue of respect to education can never be ignored by the public. there is an ongoing debate on whether the experience is more effective than formal study and books. From my perspective, I tend to prefer experience.
First and foremost, learning from life experience is more beneficial and valuable due to the fact that people learn soft skills from life. The reason is that life experience can build up one's soft skills such as communication skill and teamwork skill. For example, excellent communication skills can provide the best service to customers in the service industry.
On the other hand, there is no denying that some people think formal education is more important as it is the foundation of knowledge. Nevertheless, this argument is not fair. it should be pointed out that experiential learning could bridge the gap between theoretical knowledge and the real world. As a matter of fact, experiential learning could provide an opportunity for students to apply what they have learned to solve problems in the real case. Therefore, people obtain an improved understanding of principles and knowledge, which allow them to achieve the best outcomes.
In a nutshell, having considered all the arguments above, we may safely reach the conclusion that life experience is more important than formal study and books. Even though school education is the foundation of knowledge, life experience can develop an individual's skills and achieve the best outcomes in their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, such as, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35269709544 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90231092198 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576763485477 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0435305523 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2307692308 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.25397266985 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207809071969 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725653035816 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530251941717 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130486117083 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406135639005 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.