Some people argue laws changes human behavior whereas some disagree. Do you agree with it?
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A typical day reveals laws and order should change the behavior of humans have been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. People always used to analyze and explain that laws are compulsory for everyone where some people disagree for it. Regarding this topic I will explain in the next paragraphs.
To begin with, laws and orders are compulsory in every country. Some people argue that laws changes human behavior and although some people disagree. Laws are developed by our government to reduce crime and racism. There are different laws for different work in the society and are compulsory and followed by everyone. To make our society system honorably government have developed laws for people to change their behavior of living and thinking. Furthermore, some people believe laws are not important to live in the society. Without laws crime will increase and this decrease the advancement of countries. Different crime has laws to change behavior such as a murderer should be punished in jail for whole life.
In conclusion, there is no statement that laws are not important. Without laws and order our world and society will be end.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, regarding, so, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06220095694 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60177115808 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 139.433497537 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507177033493 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3397154929 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.5714285714 104.977214359 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9285714286 20.9669160288 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357751496775 0.242375264174 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134094043551 0.0925447433944 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156417997239 0.071462118173 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216998041984 0.151781067708 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125030013273 0.0609392437508 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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