Some people believe that the ability to read and write is more important today than in the past. Do you agree or disagree? Support your idea with examples.
These days the world is changing toward more integration with digital technologies. And thus the importance of the ability to rea and write has become a subject of considerable controversy. This essay will discuss the question and prove that the advanced reading as well as writing skills are not very important nowadays due to the modern technologies.
The modern applications for laptops and smartphones simplify the writing complexity for townsfolks a lot. The capabilities of the applications such as Word, Whatsapp and Twitter can blow the mind of an average language teacher. Even the internet browser has built in mechanisms for grammar corrections which help with spellcheck routine. For example, nowadays even a first of second grade schoolchild can type a large text without a single mistake thanks to the aforementioned tools.
With the advancement of the audio books and speech engines the necessity to read text has become less important for average people. While these modern technologies has been invented to help people with eye disabilities, they have become a kind magic wand for many people who cannot spend much time reading by allowing them to listen books and articles while walking or doing chores. And of course these progressive features may help people with low level reading skills or dyslexia to read any book with a good pace.
In conclusion, while the basic writing and reading skills are obviously important, the requirements regarding the advanced level of writing and reading skills declines dramatically.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ke thanks to the aforementioned tools. With the advancement of the audio books ...
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Line 5, column 398, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this progressive' or 'these progressives'?
Suggestion: this progressive; these progressives
... walking or doing chores. And of course these progressive features may help people with low level...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, regarding, second, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, of course, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32653061224 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87012792729 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1284750932 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.636363636 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.25397266985 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191833670316 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726731635052 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464760673421 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114861102251 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555242299952 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ke thanks to the aforementioned tools. With the advancement of the audio books ...
^^^
Line 5, column 398, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this progressive' or 'these progressives'?
Suggestion: this progressive; these progressives
... walking or doing chores. And of course these progressive features may help people with low level...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, regarding, second, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, of course, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32653061224 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87012792729 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1284750932 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.636363636 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.25397266985 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191833670316 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726731635052 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464760673421 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114861102251 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555242299952 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.