Some people believe that boarding school are an excellent option for children, while other disagree consider both sides and conclude.
The importance of boarding school which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion.This essay will elaborate both aspects of this trend and this lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reason which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems fact that makes students independent and self reliant and also further enhances their confidence level.Another pivotal aspect for this argument is that they learn to deal with students with multi- cultural background moreover, they learn discipline, cooperation, and teamwork.. Needless to say all this merits stand boarding school in a good stead.
However, there are some pitfalls that negate this argument and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but the most alarming is that strict rules might be tough to follow and also widens children might feel homesick or isolated lonely alone there is less social interaction with outside world and children further might get involved in bad company . Hence it is apparent why many are against boarding school.
According to the argument aforementioned above one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of boarding school are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless the potential drawback should not overlooked
either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50952380952 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74672252425 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647619047619 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.080625962 50.4703680194 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.285714286 104.977214359 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.9669160288 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.33497536946 300% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135340774753 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663835749239 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439681611027 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820161601433 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338502443343 0.0609392437508 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 12.6369458128 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.27 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.94827586207 297% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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