Some people believe that the law changes human behaviour. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
Few individuals suggest that regulations set by the government can alter the person's attitude. In my perspective, I support the foregoing argument due to becoming more disciplined and lesser chance to commit violation. This essay will discuss my justifications for the stated reasons.
To begin with, people who follow the administration's statutories can be observed to exhibit a much controlled behavior in the society. To illustrate, walking in the proper pedestrain lane reflects a disciplined person. Moreover, they are considered as law abiding citizens of the state. Rude and inappropriate manners cannot be seen on them even at diddicult situations. Hence, laws could significantly modify the majority of men and women's general conduct through this convention.
Apart from this, the fact that individuals are strictly doing the policies can help them avoid to deviate from the rules. This sounds true as they are afraid of the punishment it entails not following written instructions. For example, involving oneself to a crime as simple as shop-lifting has a corresponding punishment which is particularly included in the law.
To recapitulate, the moment people follows the rule of the government would lead them to a more appropriate morale and prevention of the commitment of crime. Perhaps, it is the responsibility of the statute to ensure its citizens to be well-mannered in the community they belong to.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ons set by the government can alter the persons attitude. In my perspective, I support ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...neral conduct through this convention. Apart from this, the fact that individua...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid deviating'.
Suggestion: avoid deviating
...rictly doing the policies can help them avoid to deviate from the rules. This sounds true as the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42792792793 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2604430062 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662162162162 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5397507219 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.6923076923 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.25397266985 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0833753926051 0.242375264174 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0249769051047 0.0925447433944 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319985982736 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0438431591854 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277173668537 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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