Some people say music promotes children learning. However, there are mixed results on impact of music generated from researches. To what extent do you agree or disagree that: music has impacts on humans' life?
One of the most conspicuous trend of colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that music promotes children learning and has high impacts on humans' life. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that promoting music can only contribute to improve children's knowledge, but they can lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. For instance, In western-countries, 50% of the people are music lovers, according to the music research team, the music is a positive impact on human's life. Needless to say that, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting the chances of excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspects of the aforementioned trend is that it is only likely to help one's thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such attributes to responsibility, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of the music promotes children learning and has positive impacts on humans' life and health.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of music learning and good health are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88086642599 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77137835695 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534296028881 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7514285481 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245037253329 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975996358711 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116287402529 0.071462118173 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149589733154 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562342201319 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 82.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 74.5 Out of 90
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