Over the past few decades, there has been a high degree of the ambivalence over this matter whether the dangerous sports should be banned. Whereas some people say that extreme sports should be banned, I sanguinely believe that they should not. This essay will further elaborate reasons to support this notion and then deduce a logical conclusion.
At the outset, There are myriads of reasons to support this notion, but one of the most compelling reason is that such games increase one's self-confidence. In my own experience, during my college days, I performed an experiment, which revealed that students who regularly participated in extreme sports performed better. Thus, the beneficial ramification of dangerous games apparently can be seen.
On the contrary, skeptics conjecture many incidents reported in the last few years, where many sports person lost their life. Although it seems ostensibly veridical, those are one side news. Those sportsman performed sports without professional training. Hence, it is correct to presume a preconceived notion.
To conclude, where there are several compelling arguments from both the sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of extreme sports far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only the advantages of participating in the dangerous games prove its significance for professional development, but also pinpoints the implications of performing extreme sports without professional supervision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...orted in the last few years, where many sports person lost their life. Although it see...
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Message: Did you mean 'this sportsman' or 'Those sportsmen'?
Suggestion: This sportsman; Those sportsmen
...bly veridical, those are one side news. Those sportsman performed sports without professional t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, so, then, thus, whereas, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64976958525 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02789174801 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649769585253 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9730103519 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.166666667 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176853682664 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617305340997 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690710338834 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100114008317 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759606877786 0.0609392437508 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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