Some people think that the design of buildings has effect, either positively or negatively, on where people work and live. To what extent you agree or disagree.
The importance of architectural design, which frequently generated a great deal of heated debate, has recently become even more controversial. Some proponents believe that the design of buildings has an effect, either positively or negatively, on where people work and live. This essay will elaborate on how the design is crucial on people's lives and how it influences the working environment.
At the outset, there are myriad of reasons why designing houses is vital to human society but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that a good design can eliminate a majority of health problems. For example, airflow is primarily considered as one of the fundamental factors in design because fresh air inside the house prevents some dangerous illnesses. Besides, houses are built to protect humanity from the change of weather and temperature of the natural environment, and to maintain a safe place to live. Thus, it is indisputable that designers have to put great efforts into the design to fulfill their purpose.
On the other hand, moving on to consider the idea of how architecture impacts the workplace, it is believed that the theme of the office for a particular company has a significant impact on staff by giving them the understanding of the principles of the company behind the logo and colors decorated. In fact, the staff's inspiration and motivation are influenced by the decoration in a way that the designers purposefully make. Therefore, a poor design can cause misunderstanding in the notion which is meant to convey.
In conclusion, taking these points into consideration, from my personal perspective, I am inclined to believe that architectural works need a massive accumulation of experiences to achieve the best results on the human being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'staffs'' or 'staff's'?
Suggestion: staffs'; staff's
...logo and colors decorated. In fact, the staffs inspiration and motivation are influenc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18881118881 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09632313863 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.9972926128 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.909090909 104.977214359 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232576715863 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976786103073 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156329488346 0.071462118173 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132860509314 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149335718405 0.0609392437508 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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