Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
A good health is a good wealth. If, we want to get rid of all the health problems, we have to have a good exposure in not only our diet but in the exercise as well. Where a significant number of people think that health is depends upon exercise, some debate that balanced diet is more vital for human which is a contentious matter. In my opinion, combination of both of the things make the body fit and fine eminently. This essay will elucidate further about both aspects with required examples and arguments.
There are plethora of examples which can explain that our body required a decent amount of physical work out. The most preponderant one is sweating. As majority of youngsters are used to stay in air conditioner. Although, these sort of comfort zone is literally not good for health. Consequently, they do not prefer to do exercises which help body to remove unwanted fats and prevent dangerous health issues. However, a good amount of physical work out can make body more calm, fit and productive tremendously.
On the other hand, exercise without proper diet is useless. A proper diet is inevitable. For examples, if a person is investing his time in gym and weight lifting, so, the demand for healthy diet will automatically augmented. We are living in a society where mouth-watering foods like pizzas, burgers and all other fast food allure significantly. Nonetheless, it is not good for anyone health in any way and we should provoke ourself for such kind of things.
In conclusion, on the basis of above-mentioned points, one can conclude that a health diets and exercise is two sides of coin and we have to think while doing both the tasks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... The most preponderant one is sweating. As majority of youngsters are used to stay...
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Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this sort' or 'these nulls'?
Suggestion: this sort; these nulls
...d to stay in air conditioner. Although, these sort of comfort zone is literally not good f...
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Line 6, column 216, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'augment'
Suggestion: augment
...and for healthy diet will automatically augmented. We are living in a society where mouth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, nonetheless, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79513888889 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7804479354 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576388888889 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8841684438 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2352941176 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251465153728 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699492342484 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715686695095 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161289934713 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891861477625 0.0609392437508 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 12.6369458128 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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