Some people think that keeping pets is good for children. While others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options & give examples?
The importance of pets which was debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others rejects this notion .the substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years . in my opinion , the former proposition appears to be more rational . this essay will further elaborated both positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion .
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that people mostly have a pet at home .another pivotal aspect of this argument is that pets bring many happiness and fun to the family. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
However ,there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that pet is not good for children . Pets bring many not happiness and fun to the family .Besides, hence it is apparent why many are against this trend.
According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of pets are good for children are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07762557078 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70434033225 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579908675799 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.4736701239 50.4703680194 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.555555556 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.33497536946 356% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149726301252 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599311262693 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444801379333 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939587612347 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127651796651 0.0609392437508 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.