Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trends of contemporary world is an upsurge in human behavior is changing by law. The substantial influence of people's behavior has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend. From my perspective, this issue requires a careful deliberation. The essay will further demonstrate the reasons and explanations for supporting this argument and thus deduce the logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why behavior of people is changing by implementing rules and regulations of law everywhere but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that people must follow the stringent rules and regulation. To be precise, government implement new policies to control any situation which becoming very critical condition. For instance, manufacturer must follow environmentally friendly measures to curb the pollution. Another pivotal argument is that it is very imperative for new generation to make their future safe. Some people are extremely cooperative and they are changing themselves according to the law. It is irrefutable to say that all these merits stand positive changes in human behavior in good stead, when people respect and follow their law to keep themselves safe in any situation.
One should, nevertheless, consider this concern from the other angle as well, where, some detrimental efforts could be seen as a result of aggressive and rude behavior, humans are not following their law. To elaborate further, people might get huge amount of fines, punishment and sometime they may stay in prison for short or long time and even death is also possible by breaking the rules. Apparently, good behavior people change themselves while bad people who don't accept law might be more aggressive.
After analyzing the aforementioned argument, it can be recapitulated that people are changing by law of the country is instrumental indeed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41946308725 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00678818514 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614093959732 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7908907524 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.357142857 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295062214847 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104124152671 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926943096266 0.071462118173 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181801159209 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366826873251 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.