Some people think law changes human behavior Do you agree or disagree?
Human behaviors are shaped by several factors like education, culture, family background, income and social rules as well. Among all these factors some people believe that laws change human qualities. I also agree with that statement into some extent and here I'm going to elaborate my opinions on above matter.
To begin with, we all know that few decades ago society was very calm and peaceful place. People were conscious about others and always tried not be a disturbance to the society. But with all these developments now society has converted into a very busy place where money plays the major role. People are willing to do anything to earn money as everything depends on money. Hence, the number of crimes including all types of robberies are getting increased day by day. For example, number of who people tend to rob banks, shops are dramatically increased in past few decades. With all these circumstances society needs something to control human activities. Here comes the role of law. Laws shaped human factors. Many people are self-controlled as they are afraid of laws and punishments. For example, drivers have self discipline because of the motor traffic rules. Otherwise, they may drive as they want and number of accidents may increase significantly.
On the other hand, apart of law many other factors have a great influence on human qualities. Culture, family background and the neighboring society do a huge impact on people, especially at their early ages.
To conclude based on the above factors I also believe that laws can change human behaviors into a good manner but they are not the only factors that shaped human behaviors.
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also, but, hence, if, may, so, well, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04727272727 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6041898853 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592727272727 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9448309155 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1111111111 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2777777778 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256660671067 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789727298178 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774186105834 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166367089823 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651543283469 0.0609392437508 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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