Some people think placing advertisements in schools is a great resource for public schools that need additional funding, but others think it exploits children by treating them as a captive audience for corporate sponsors.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
There is no doubt that schools play preponderant role in everyone's life, because it build the base of any human's life. In these modern days, it has become common to put the holdings and advertisement signs in schools that's why there is an ongoing debate on this topic whether these institutions should be allowed to put these signs or not. In my opinion, putting the advertisements in schools can have both advantages and disadvantages.
Undoubtedly, due to modernization and high infiltration, the expenses for schools have increased significantly and these institutes usually suffer from the lack of funds and putting advertisement help these organizations to get extra funds. This will further help them to provide more facilities for students and can will provide schools money to pay extra wages to the teachers, which will lead to a better standard of teaching and will help to boost the knowledge of the pupils.
In spite of these benefits, there are some disadvantages to this thing too. As some of the advertisements have a negative material written on them and this will put a bad impact on the mental development of kids. Moreover, just by reading these material students can be diverted toward the wrong direction instead of putting their efforts in building their future. This will ultimately lead the society downwards.
In the end, it can be asserted from the above discussion, that putting signs and holdings can play both positive and negative role in the students' life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09349593496 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89706238354 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544715447154 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0534932693 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.3 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109601277259 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458457453309 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03192441557 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642008362592 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358220651158 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.