Some people thinks that native regions has impact the success. Discuss about your view.
The consistently integration of globalization foster the global communication. one of the benefit is that many successful stories are well-known and widely spread in an international basis. The importance of native region, which is alway debatable, has now become more controversial. it is argued that native region has a significant impact on the success of individuals. this essay will elaborate the reason why I am against this statement and draw my own conclusion.
it is undeniable that native countries have certain impact on one's success especially in terms of education infrastructure. Majority developed countries usually provide a better quality in education and science research. According to the top 100 university US rank 2019, it is easily concluded that in this list, seventy percent of university are located in developing countries. As a illustration, people born in developed countries have more resources and opportunities that those born in developing countries.
However, the success cannot solely depend on the external factors. Instead, it is the intrinsic elements, such as personality and mental strength that plays a fundamental effect. For instance, in the documentary called The desert Flower, the actress, who was born in the desert of South Africa, became a top model in the fashion industry. Later, she devoted herself in the fight of gender discrimination in the United Nations.
Considering all the substantial insights that are outline above, the conclusion is that despite of the impact of native countries, it is the intrinstic characteristics that lead individual to the success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5140562249 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24635642203 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610441767068 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4507635485 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0714285714 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 7.25397266985 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172998300249 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059569112178 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841657984348 0.071462118173 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978316238263 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529812919862 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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