Some people work hard for long hours to achieve success and some give importance for free time for themselves. Give your opinion and discuss your views.
The importance of work and life balance is a debatable topic. The substantial influence of hard work towards attaining success has veered many a soul short of allocating free time for them. There is ample support for the claim that while hard work is necessary for attaining success, taking time out for entertainment and relaxation is also required to keep a person charged and motivated. The following discussion elaborates both viewpoints and will lead to a logical conclusion.
On one hand, the most conspicuous reason why people work long hours is rooted in the fact that success is generally viewed in relation to materialistic and monetary objectives. For example, employees working in multinational companies always seem to be loaded with work pressure and never ending deadlines to meet, and continue to do so in order to get a promotion or salary increment and grow in their careers. It is evident; therefore, that hard work and spending long working hours are imperative for success.
On the other hand, it is a well known fact that leisure time significantly boosts productivity, concentration and improves social life. For example, people who regularly take time off from work to spend with their family and friends feel relaxed, energized and better equipped to perform than their counterparts who are always burdened with work. This clearly confirms the importance of leisure time in our day to day life.
In conclusion, while spending long hours at work are required to be successful, it is also important to allocate time for leisure and relaxation. The foregoing discussion corroborates the view that free time and hard work contribute equally towards success. Further, it is expected that people take cognizance of this fact and ensure they maintain a healthy work-life balance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21649484536 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87945032274 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556701030928 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4280102346 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.769230769 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337234508689 0.242375264174 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129897046097 0.0925447433944 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865644206528 0.071462118173 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224541617007 0.151781067708 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672326208445 0.0609392437508 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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