Some type of employments are more suitable for men and other types of employment are more appropriate for women.
To what extent do you agree? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experiences.
Jobs of different natures are best suited to each gender. Some people think that a few specialized jobs can be better performed by men rather than females, while some maintain that both genders can equally do better in all spheres of employment. This essay will discuss that both men and women can equally do well in all job spheres.
Firstly, there are myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. The world’s dynamics has changed significantly and as of now both men and women are considered equal. This entails that jobs of any nature are not gender bounded but can be performed by both qualified men and women. As an example, qualified women are now seen leading multinational companies once dominant by men. This scenario has undoubtedly put an end to gender discrimination in job sector.
On the other hand, owing to peculiar and more physical nature military employments thought to be the best suitable for men only have now inducted women in different job roles. However, women have successfully proved their mettle in this sphere too. For instance, women are now performing the duties of fighter pilot and are standing shoulder to shoulder with their counterparts in the line of duty. Hence, job restriction based on gender has been completely ruled out.
Despite of gender dissimilarity, both have emerged to be successful in all domains of employment. Therefore, I opine that no job is best suited for any gender and united together both men and women can do wonders in all sort of employments.
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- Large shopping malls are replacing small shops.What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples. 77
- Urban sprawl is an increasing issue around the world. One way in which to solve this issue is to construct cities vertically rather than horizontally. Do you agree / disagree with this statement 85
- The chart below show household spending patterns in two countries between 1980 and 2008 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... do wonders in all sort of employments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96470588235 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75604539804 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556862745098 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.152578894 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4285714286 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135624628344 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048155404314 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052713155623 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896450800291 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425875926979 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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