Racism has been a major threat to the society and continues to be an alarming factor. This is basically an act of abusing people by their language, skin colour and appearance. It somehow emasculates some human beings to be arrogant and abusive to others.
All fellow beings in this world are bound to travel to other countries for work and to earn a living. They should be given a good environmental ambience for them to feel comfortable. The environment includes - work place, home and other public places. People from other countries should be allowed to express their thoughts and move freely without any despair.
In contrast, some anti social and insane people tend to abuse people verbally or sometimes even assault them physically and start looking at other people like aliens. This makes the immigrant to feel uncomfortable and annoying. These anti social elements has an oblique reason that their jobs and freedom has been snatched by the immigrants. They start losing their conscience and be tough to the people by creating an uncontrollable situation. These traits are not inherited genetically and comes through ignorance.
In my opinion, all people, in-house or immigrants should be treated with respect as they happen to be visitors and show them that this country is really a safe place to live and work. This promotes harmony in the nation and can be a reason to attract more and more people. Good people with etiquette’s contribute to a country to become more democratic and safe place.
- Should cigarettes and other tobacco products be outlawed? 85
- Mass media including TV, radio & newspaper have become the essential part of lives 80
- Racism is a long-lasting problem that bothers millions of people all over the world. Agree or Disagree? 77
- student's marks deduction on late submission of assignment. Agree or Disagree. 64
- Racism is a long-lasting problem that bothers millions of people all over the world. 55
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, really, so, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 8.36945812808 227% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0438247012 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71376352537 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589641434263 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9824195595 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 7.25397266985 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00813286903247 0.242375264174 3% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00341140198478 0.0925447433944 4% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0127642974356 0.071462118173 18% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00516793645509 0.151781067708 3% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0089511285105 0.0609392437508 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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