Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters.
Do u support it or not? (Agree/Disagree)
Youngsters are getting inspiration from famous celebrities such as film and sports stars. While some people think that the youth can consider these stars as role models, others maintain that the celebrities shouldn't be considered as a role model. This essay will discuss why the famous film and sports stars can be regarded as a role model and thus young generation can see them as a source of inspiration.
Firstly, the on-screen stars set an example to youngsters on how one can be successful and have a great career with a celebrity status in society. This fact will certainly help the next generation to follow their steps and eventually become successful. Secondly, the lads and lasses can get inspired from the truth that not all the star's life is a cake walk to success but full of obstacles to reach their current status. For example, there are lot of kids in India have been choosing cricket as their profession after being inspired from the Indian cricket legend Sachin Tendulkar's life and successful career.
Finally, the good messages, such as plant a tree a month, delivered from successful stars can produce a massive positive change in these young kid's mindset. Despite the power of celebrities impact on youth is high, some people don't think sports and movie stars must be considered as a role model. These people are unaware of how these stars can influence the juveniles thoughts and character by showing their skills and attitude on and off the screens.
To conclude, the successful humans from sports and glamour industries are inspiring young generation and thus become a role model for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'stars'' or 'star's'?
Suggestion: stars'; star's
...nspired from the truth that not all the stars life is a cake walk to success but full...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'kids'' or 'kid's'?
Suggestion: kids'; kid's
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96691176471 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53459785973 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544117647059 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4965302578 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 122.818181818 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264129533541 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109150322076 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585173917449 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1782173091 0.151781067708 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042936527508 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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