There are social, medical, and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. Do you think that the problems of mobile phones outweigh the benefits? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from observations or your own experience.
The question of whether to use a hand phone or not has recently sparked heated debate drawing the undivided attention of the public. While some people posit that the mobile phones brought adverse effects into our lives, I strongly assert that the usage of handheld devices has a number of advantages. This essay will discuss firstly the advantages and then the negatives sides of using a mobile phone.
First and foremost, public are concerned about mobile device usage because of health issues caused by the radiation. Also, the social media available in mobile phones made the juveniles spending more time on them rather than focussing on their studies. These medical and social ramifications of a gadget use characterising the mobile phone as a villain in the society. For instance, a survey conducted by the University of Melbourne revealed that 79% of the student told that their study plans were greatly impacted by the phones.
However, the benefits of mobile phones are numerous. The mobile phone opens the door for knowledge by browsing the Internet and finding the information on-the-go. Also, these small handsets are indeed saving lot of time by allowing users to complete most of the activities without even stepping out of their bed. A survey conducted by LinkedIn, a famous job portal, revealed that 96% of the corporate companies informed that their staff productivity has been increased since they do not need to go out to perform any activity such as banking.
I am of the firm belief that mobile phones brought positives in our lives as the benefits outweighed the negative sides of it. I urge the mobile phone users to take appropriate measures to neutralise this predicament before the inevitable effects of it become irreversibly detrimental.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
The question of whether to use a hand phone or not has recently...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11724137931 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67706158681 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0953006735 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.153846154 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187497765856 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765308886023 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515825077999 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116006687025 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204286676307 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 55.0591133005 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.