Technological access to online music should be free or paid. What do you think?
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A typical day revels the free online music available for everyone has been one of the prominent topic in the contemporary discussion. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and i will explain why in this essay.
To begin with, online music is free for everyone on internet and also this play suspicious role in life. Free online music help many struggling singers and composes to learn from prerecorded music. Some people don't have enough money to hire a music teacher so online music help those people who are struggling their life. Online music must be free for people or needy person who really want to achieve goal. Free online music provide motivation to many musicians and singers.
Probing further, if songs will get paid then they will lose its popularity and market value. Nobody will buy paid songs and this will gives end to the career of the songs. People take free source as granted and show adequate respect to composers for their songs.
In conclusion, I would say songs have to be free because they are our companion. Maybe free songs can help the poor person to become a good singer. If songs get paid no one will buy them it may become a time waste.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, really, so, then, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62551440329 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2617053329 2.71678728327 83% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572016460905 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.1480779424 50.4703680194 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.9333333333 104.977214359 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231147812529 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848935869168 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629664456299 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125252256846 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756859799264 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 12.6369458128 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.5310837438 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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