A large shopping malls are replacing small shops what is your opinion about this?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is colossal upsurge large shopping malls are replacing small shops. there is the widespread worry this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay .
There are number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that daily needs are present for everyone in big malls like grocery, clothes and so on. Not only contribute to in small shops but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefit of big malls in city which sells everything is original and also of good quality are indeed to great to ignore.
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...his and I will explain why in this essay . There are number of arguments in favor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 1207.87684729 76% => OK
No of words: 195.0 242.827586207 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67692307692 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50463959321 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620512820513 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 379.143842365 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5687243718 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 7.25397266985 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170828654712 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723655351335 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918318509112 0.071462118173 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118438689664 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982331909517 0.0609392437508 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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