In the 18th century due to industrialization, a lot of people migrate to developed countries. This affected lifestyle and increased problem in developed countries. What is your opinion about this?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world a colossal upsurge in migration due to industrialization. There are a wide range of factor why this is happening. In my opinion, this situation can remedy provided that some effective measures are under taken.
There is a myriad of reasons accountable for this soaring concern. The most preponderant one is that due to various job opportunities in developed countries people are migrating. Not only, that reason standard of living increases also, life expectancy increases. Needless, to say all these reasons have a far-reaching impact on something.
Steps to deal with this problems are many, the most effective ones are not abstract and complicated, but accessible and practicable. The primary one lies in the fact that government should develop more opportunity for their people to work. Besides, the migrants should be taught about healthy lifestyle. Only when convergent effort from all sectors are ensured we can a considerable change in overcoming this soaring concern.
To conclude, dealing with this soaring concern is one of the most prevalent issues that face almost all countries of the world today. Nevertheless the concrete steps as discussed earlier can effectively strengthen and alleviate this growing concern. Its potential impact is indeed too dire to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...lmost all countries of the world today. Nevertheless the concrete steps as discussed earlier...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, nevertheless, so, then, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43540669856 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00199486494 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3186973425 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.1428571429 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9285714286 20.9669160288 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201179553791 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641665562292 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368113566688 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121138310469 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349644419526 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.68 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 79.0 Out of 90
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