Whether design of building will have a positive or negative impact on people’s life and work?
The modern era has seen many challenges with necessary groundwork that was laid in the past century of technological advancements. The current topic of impact of building design on people's life can be explained further through careful consideration which will intimately evaluate the topic. There are opposing views to every stance, and this topic is not different. I would like to put forth the case that will provide a detailed account that it has more positive impact on life.
To review the first case of the topic modern building helps people to think in a creative and positive way; one can put forth the case that building design provides people to imagine in a different view. It can be further stated with a great degree of evaluation that people attract more to design and infrastructure of the building. In addition, there is no denying in the fact that it also encourage people to work better. However, an opposing point of view cannot be ignored which is correlation between building design and productivity.
If we look at the other side of the issue, infrastructure plays a vital role in once health. Moreover, it is quite evident that it has positive impact on people's health. Consequently, one can confidently state that it bring fresh air and aesthetic view. Hence, it is clear that modern buildings brings more positive impact on people.
In conclusion, the current topic can be summarized as building design brings positive feeling towards people that make them to be more productive and live a healthy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re productive and live a healthy life.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74251999418 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536964980545 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0079645941 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8461538462 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335582554704 0.242375264174 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117539118344 0.0925447433944 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908381141477 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208191595629 0.151781067708 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357194664939 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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