People are moving to urban areas from rural areas for better life. what are advantages and disadvantages of living in urban areas and rural areas?
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A typical day reveals that people are moving to urban areas for better life has been one of the prominent topic in the contemporary discussions. People are always been intrigued to analyze and explain the life of living at urban areas. Regarding this I will explain in the next paragraphs with examples.
To commence with, for development and life people are to urban areas. In urban areas there are better facilities for people as compare to rural areas. urban areas have good employment jobs at good salaries. To fulfill their life people move to big cities to get jobs and to make their family proud. Urban areas have good business opportunities for the better settlements. There are big and ultramodern hospitals and good doctors to cure diseases. Furthermore, medical facilities are best in urban areas doctors available for 24 hours. People are well educated and they have standard of living. Shops are very close to buy groceries and many more for example malls, grocery shops and many more.
As to compare, rural areas have no modern facilities, no their is no modernized hospitals and not well educated doctors. People are not educated and they are old fashioned. Anyhow rural areas have clean environment which is safe to breathe and also there are cheap accommodations.
In conclusion, urban areas are best for living because there are facilities but there is no clean environment. In rural areas their are no good facilities but the environment is clean. Although urban areas are good its my opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ral areas have no modern facilities, no their is no modernized hospitals and not well...
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...is no clean environment. In rural areas their are no good facilities but the environm...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...acilities but the environment is clean. Although urban areas are good its my opinion.
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...is clean. Although urban areas are good its my opinion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, as for, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.5418719212 209% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9963099631 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63973076996 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468634686347 0.580463131201 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8847760199 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.2631578947 104.977214359 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2631578947 20.9669160288 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73684210526 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.484481071017 0.242375264174 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169939368545 0.0925447433944 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13119647184 0.071462118173 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31112577499 0.151781067708 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780748836529 0.0609392437508 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.0 Out of 90
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