There are a lot of inventions nowadays, which invention do you think is more important in our day-to-day lifestyle?
Recently, the significance of the most important invention in the day-to-day life and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that computers are highly beneficial, such issue might be regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that invention of electronic machines can be a plus and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, the emerge of computers as a most important invention can provide the society with noticeable effects, which are rooted in the fact that smart gadgets, as well as electrical instruments, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experience, which demonstrated the relationship between the modern society and the sedentary lifestyle. Hence, the beneficial ramifications of both the Internet and social media apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of education science, the invention of computers might increase the consequences of poor eyesight. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of the revolutionary invention relate to this reality that the demerits of computer programs pertain to the computer terminals. As a well-known example, a scientific study undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of the high technology is correlated negatively with students’ education. Thus, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of achievement.
To conclude, while there are compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of computer technology as a most important invention far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of the cyberinfrastructure prove the significance of computer terminals, but also pinpoint major problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...his essay. From a social standpoint, the emerge of computers as a most important invent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73722627737 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44243977481 2.71678728327 127% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598540145985 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5436298753 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184368330555 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617091842203 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072217746867 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106094176995 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433614338544 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 11.5310837438 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 55.0591133005 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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