There have been many life-changing advances in the last century. Which is the most important invention of the past 100 years the computer, the antibiotics or the motor vehicles?
Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
The role of life-saving and life comforting inventions for mankind is widely debated with many people claiming that these inventions have made their life lot easier. While there are many recent advances, I believe that computers are the most integral of all of them and is continually serving the humanity. This essay will further elaborate my stance and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
To begin with, there are various reasons why computers are the most important invention to date. The most conspicuous one is that the advent of the computer has reduced the manual jobs which were earlier tedious and time-consuming. In addition, the rate of errors is drastically declined thus, giving a high accuracy to the work performed by working people. Hence, computers have saved a lot of time and made work management efficient.
Another key justification for upholding this notion is that computers offer a vast reservoir of knowledge to people of all ages. Moreover, learning is no longer a restricted now with the help of the internet which has provided a platform for curious minds. For instance, most people nowadays prefer to be technology savvy to keep themselves updated of all happenings around the world with the use of internet and computers. Thus, there is no doubt that computers are a boon to mankind in many ways.
This essay discussed how computers have reduced the workload and provides the latest piece of information. In my view, computers are by far the most significant achievement of mankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, no doubt, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07171314741 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79270648948 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569721115538 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6783272574 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9230769231 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135838345922 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491943424351 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045942213433 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837262054838 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313708782231 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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