These days some people are involved in dangerous activities such as extreme skiing, motorcycles jumping etc. Whether you support them or not.
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick review on typical day reveals sporting activities has always been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. people have always intrigued to analyze and explain the extreme results of performing life threatening activities like skiing and motorcycle jumping. Regarding this, I would say they can be proven to be fatal for our lives.
one compelling argument in favor of my instance on this issue has to do with the fact that these stunts can cause serious injuries to different body parts. this is because, some people are not wearing suitable preventive gears or are using heap quality protection kit, which may tear apart easily when an individual met with an accident. As a result, the skier or the driver may fall in trouble that may even arise question of life or death.
looking back at the introduction, one could also argue that these unnatural activities when telecast in the television may have a deep effect on the psychology of an individual. Due to which, individual may get motivated in order to imitate the appalling students without considering preventive measures. As a case in point, teenagers are not fully matured. so, they get so influenced by these stunts that get burning desire to imitate them in order to look cool or impress their colleagues. The consequences are very fatal that even may lead to their death in some cases.
Hence based on the arguments above, we can conclude that sporting activities not only cause threat to life of an individual but also have negative impact on the psychology of children. Therefore, I believe that they should be performed under strict supervision.
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also, but, hence, if, look, may, regarding, so, therefore, as to, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00343642612 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73489867534 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615120274914 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8798695006 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113692322978 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349073613108 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361427392614 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062386284498 0.151781067708 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340737580147 0.0609392437508 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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