The time people devote in job leaves very little time for personal life. How widespread is the problem. What problems will this shortage of time causes?
Nowadays, it is increasingly acknowledged that the lack of the right balance between work and personal life is one of the biggest issues which people are facing. While some people believe that it is normal for everyone and widespread over the world, others advocate that devoting too much time to work is harmful to personal health and family relationship. As far as I am concerned, people should find the way to balance jobs and personal life.
People who emphasize the importance of spending more time in their jobs are primarily focusing on the profits of economy which be brought from devoting to work. They advocate that it is normal as everyone should devote to develop the society. Nevertheless, this argument does not hold water. That is because a developed society needs not only well economic system, but also healthy individual and strong family relationships.
It is evidently reasonable for me to believe that having a healthy body and a good family relationship is more beneficial. The main justification of this view is that a healthy body can make work more efficient, and a good family relationship can leave people with no worries. That is to say, appropriate rest can release heavy pressure of work and get more time to be with your family.
In a nutshell, although this controversial topic never fails to attract the public attention, we may safely reach the conclusion that having a right balance between work and personal life will be more advantageous in respect of this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, while, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78831335363 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8385924715 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.545454545 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227168130438 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813981415524 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563370425656 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132714386216 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554282109636 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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